Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Cause Of Death

Acids, love and sulphur
Were the things that killed her
And crystals in her blood
Of cyanogen and mud
Gave her bruised heart
A breathful of mirth
She had lost her love to these
To the steroids of peace
And when cocaine earned her faith
She found ecstasy in death


  1. replace the "she" with "he"
    and u jus wrote jim morrison's biography.

    and do i even need to tell u that ur good?

    try readind william blake : auguries of innocence.

  2. damn good...and amazingly morbid.....great debut....